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I'm weaker than you.
You're stronger than me.
So what?

That does not
Give you the right to laugh at me,
To beat me up and spit on me.
Where all I can oppose you with
Are the tears running through my hands,
disappearing in the ground.
But you are doing it nonetheless.

You succeeded.
Not much left of me.
So stop?

No, you don't.
You're enjoying your superiority.
For you it's just a game, a prank.
But you're turning me cold.
All I can do is collecting
those frozen tears of hate
But you continue nonetheless.

You'll never stop.
I can't do anything.
So wrong!

Even so
all your life you laughed at me,
Beat me up and spit on me,
I do not have the right to poison you,
plunging my tears into your flesh,
laughing for the first time and the last.
But I'm doing it nonetheless.
For the #Emo-Club Contest #12
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tommyboywood Apr 22, 2013  Professional Writer
bullies imitate their invisible father (John 8:44)
BloodyMess-VaoT Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not sure what exactly you mean with "invisible father" I guess you mean both the father who "does not care" and the devil?

I read the passage and I still wonder every day anew why people are so prone to manipulation and so resistant against reasoning...

Especially for children I understand that when they only were shown poor ways from their role model they only know how to act poor.
But I can't understand why so many people never seem to think about their way even when they get older.
tommyboywood Apr 25, 2013  Professional Writer
the devil is the biggest bully of all, and sadly many imitate his poor example, wittingly or more often unwittingly
saints-fan-12 Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I've had my share of bullying and it hurts luckily it stopped and the bully and i became friends, the second time it was one of my friends, but she moved.
BloodyMess-VaoT Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That you became friends is a nice outcome.:)
saints-fan-12 Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Jellyfrog1 Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
We should become evil dictators, and punish anybody that bullies someone with death... maybe a bit harsh but bullying is sick
BloodyMess-VaoT Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That would prolly be a quite entertaining solution, but wouldn't that be big scale bullying?
Jellyfrog1 Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It depends on how you look at it... does Karma count as bullying? ;)
BloodyMess-VaoT Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah Karma wise it would be their own fault, plus if you are an evil dictator all your actions are justified anyways!
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